Group: Rough Cut and Feedback

FEEDBACK:
-The props used are very effective. For example the cranes create a very eerie and creepy atmosphere. The blood used looked very realistic and gory.
-The suicide section with blood was shot and edited very well. The fast cutting rate is very effective and the distorted and blurry shots make the blood appeal very realistic.
-ECU shot tear very effective makes audience feel sympathetic towards girl
-The swish pan transition revealing the supernatural girl was very fluent and effective
-The overlays make the opening unique and adds

Improvements
-Change the order of shots when Hannah is reading the article. They don't flow as well as they could.
-Jane the dark figure needs to be more shocking. Sometimes she is just in the shot so it isn't surprising. Try to create more scare factor.
-Continuity editing needs to be improved. For example she picks up the knife at the wrong.
-Organise and include titles.
- Make sure the lights are seen turning off.