Monday, 9 December 2013

Feedback 2 - Mrs Fernandez

Textual Analysis feedback

Alex
Well done, excellent L4 analysis - well presented, thorough.  Particularly good use of audience theory.  To secure high L4, improve detail on ideological discourse; terms and use of specific shots.

Danielle
Some excellent observations on 'Shutter Island' which is L4, however second analysis is missing - see me and upload ASAP.

Laurel
Your second one is an improvement; more detail, focused research - however still gaps.  It is vital you improve these posts for a L4.

Well done girls, some excellent practical work last week and this does show real promise, refine these analysis posts for top marks.

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