Our story follows a girl.
She is 18 years old and her name is Bridget. At the beginning of our story she
makes the decision to take a gap year before she goes to university to study
Criminology and Criminal Justice. Moving to America for the year, she rents a
house alone, oblivious to the knowledge that the previous occupant was found
hanging from the ceiling by her neck/ lying in a pool of her own blood drained
from the slits in her wrists.
Exploring the house on
her moving-in day, she finds a small wooden music box in the garage. As she
opens it, she finds a folded white origami crane stuffed inside, the soft,
twinkling music of the box begins to play. Beside the box is a large black
photo album with the words ‘Best Friends’ written in bright red ink. Bridget
thinks nothing of either of them placing them in a box she intends to take to a
charity shop.
Carrying on with her
everyday life, Bridget is ostracised from the people around her because she is
a foreign outsider. Around the house Bridget begins to find multiple white
cranes that she continues to throw away. Bridget begins to become suspicious
and one night she dreams of the music from the music box and the young girl
telling her that they are going to be best friends for all eternity. Waking with
a start, Bridget begins her investigation.
Bridget enquires about
the previous occupants and discovers that they all committed suicide. She fills
entire walls with her newspaper clippings, post-it notes and scribbled
ramblings of her discoveries. All crime scene photos of the
suicides contain a small white origami crane in the background exactly the same
as the ones she found in her house. She identifies
the spirit contained in the music box as Jane from the
inscriptions inscribed on the bottom of the box.
One stormy evening, she
begins to hear the gentle music of the music box and faint inaudible
whispering. She slowly walks towards the noise. Lightening flashes and the
lights in her house are cut out; the music and whispers get louder as she
fearfully pushes on the door from which the noise is coming
from. The open music box with the crane stood next to it wrests on the mantle
pieces of the glowing fireplace. Photos are scattered across the floor, the
whispering appears to be emanating from the black photo album that rests on a
stand on the single table in the room. As Bridget opens the album, the
whispering stops so that only the music box can be heard but it seems to be
playing more slowly; inside the album are horrific images of the dead young
girls she has been investigating. The whispers start again and a dark
demonic-like shadow can be seen in the corner of the room, the
whispers say: “be my friend”, Bridget throws the book across the room and
runs to the mantle piece grabbing the music box and the crane and throwing them
into the fire. A loud scream is heard and when Bridget wakes up, everything is
still and back to normal.
Bridget begins to
investigate who Jane really is and her motive for torturing her victims. She
discovers that the music box originated from Japan and the legend told that it
was owned by a small orphan child. It is believed that if you fold 1,000 cranes
your wish will come true so the orphan child spent her days using anything she
could find to repeatedly fold the cranes. The orphan was completely alone;
her greatest wish was that she could have all the friends she wanted so that
she would never have to be alone again. On the evening that Bridget
discovers that the shadow figure is collecting victims to be her friends for all eternity, there is another storm. The music from the music box
can be heard once more but this time, the soft twinkling emanates from the garage. The cranes seem to be scattered around the entire house imitating
the deaths of Jane's previous victims. Some hang by their necks, others are
drenched in thick red blood. From open windows, the storm's wind blows all of
Bridget's research off of the wall except a single newspaper article.
Bridget hesitantly walks towards the article making out the headline:
'Bridget was too young to have died'. Bridget rips the article from the
wall tossing it in the still burning fire and begins to flee for her life. The
music plays loudly through the house and, as the whispering begins again, the
shadow creature torments and chases her. On realising Jane's weakness to fire,
Bridget sets the entire house alight managing to run to safety. A piercing,
shrill scream is the only thing that can be heard followed by complete silence.
After a short amount of time Bridget moves back to England safe from the
shadow creature and the cranes. The music box has survived the fire completely unharmed.
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